Flawless work, gripping story, wonderfully put together. I'm not ashamed to say I teared up.
Anxiously awaiting "step 5" !
Good, but not as I expected
I liked it, though I knew I would going in.
That said, your style has changed in some ways. There was a lot of creepiness potential with Render being controlled, and it felt very 'up front'... I can't put my finger on any one thing, perhaps him talking too much made his new condition too 'comprehendable' to the viewers, I don't know. You redeemed it a lot with the 'my pleasure' line, however.
One of the things that felt eerily similar up until now was the relationship between Render and Smite; since you were abstract on the timeline, I debated if you were in fact turning one into the other, and that Smite's rampage was actually Render's future. While that could still be possible, I think the arrival of his sister and (possibly temporary) freedom from the bug makes that less likely. Like the physical arrival last episode, you've brought Render out of the clouds and down to Earth for the viewer.
All in all, you've cleared up the status quo a lot, and that mystery was part of the charm of the series. Still very much looking forward to where it's going, but if I had to site anything as a negative it would be that.
Good work, keep it up!
You've come a long way with this; I really didn't care for the haphazardness of the first few episodes, but the artsy feel of the entire series has really started to shine through as opposed to stubling over itself and muddling the storyline. I find myself running the gamit of emotions; you capture this tense creepiness and squeeze every last drop out of it, and your pacing is much more spot-on than it has been in the past. Excellent job with this piece, and I can't wait to see where you take it from here. Bravo!!!
Bombs didn't always diffuse
Not bad, but I felt the bombs were too unforgiving; not enough time, and more importantly, didn't always diffuse.
Solid game, though. Good work!
Excellent game, much harder than the last one; although given that there are difficulty levels, shouldn't easy be, well, easier?
Could be better
Horrible driving killed it for me. The collision is WAY off. I was jumping and getting stuck all the time.
Solid piece here! Reminds me of Frog's Theme from Chrono Trigger a little, which was one of my favorite themes in the game.
Keep up the great work!
Dude, I got flashbacks of my childhood from this song. Simply amazing work, keep it up!!!
Hahahaha, thanks for the review.
I am not too manly to admit this song brought a tear to my eye; it's amazing, if I can manage to design something good enough to match the quality of this song I will definitely use it.
Great work man. You really touched me.
I love touching people... wait that sounds bad. I love writing music that stuff that touches people. There is nothing unmanly about crying... then only reason woman cry more than men is because men break their hearts more. That and PMS is just worth crying about. Thanks for the review mate :).
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