Score: 10

"Outstanding"

submission: There She Is!! step4

date: September 1, 2008

Flawless work, gripping story, wonderfully put together. I'm not ashamed to say I teared up.

Anxiously awaiting "step 5" !

Score: 9

"Good, but not as I expected"

submission: [2008] REBOOT 10

date: April 20, 2008

I liked it, though I knew I would going in.

That said, your style has changed in some ways. There was a lot of creepiness potential with Render being controlled, and it felt very 'up front'... I can't put my finger on any one thing, perhaps him talking too much made his new condition too 'comprehendable' to the viewers, I don't know. You redeemed it a lot with the 'my pleasure' line, however.

One of the things that felt eerily similar up until now was the relationship between Render and Smite; since you were abstract on the timeline, I debated if you were in fact turning one into the other, and that Smite's rampage was actually Render's future. While that could still be possible, I think the arrival of his sister and (possibly temporary) freedom from the bug makes that less likely. Like the physical arrival last episode, you've brought Render out of the clouds and down to Earth for the viewer.

All in all, you've cleared up the status quo a lot, and that mystery was part of the charm of the series. Still very much looking forward to where it's going, but if I had to site anything as a negative it would be that.

Good work, keep it up!

Score: 7

"Bombs didn't always diffuse"

submission: Beat the Boss

date: April 18, 2008

Not bad, but I felt the bombs were too unforgiving; not enough time, and more importantly, didn't always diffuse.

Solid game, though. Good work!

Score: 9

"Great Job!"

submission: [2007] REBOOT 9

date: November 21, 2007

You've come a long way with this; I really didn't care for the haphazardness of the first few episodes, but the artsy feel of the entire series has really started to shine through as opposed to stubling over itself and muddling the storyline. I find myself running the gamit of emotions; you capture this tense creepiness and squeeze every last drop out of it, and your pacing is much more spot-on than it has been in the past. Excellent job with this piece, and I can't wait to see where you take it from here. Bravo!!!

Score: 9

"Level 39"

submission: Bloons Tower Defense 2

date: October 25, 2007

Excellent game, much harder than the last one; although given that there are difficulty levels, shouldn't easy be, well, easier?

Score: 7

"Funny, but too long"

submission: The Truth Is

date: September 19, 2007

Clever, but you could stand to shorten / cut the repetitve parts a little bit.

Other than that, I like.

Score: 5

"Could be better"

submission: DestructoTanks

date: August 31, 2007

Horrible driving killed it for me. The collision is WAY off. I was jumping and getting stuck all the time.

Score: 8

"Interesting"

submission: Boss Bash

date: August 29, 2007

I love the concept, really. And the effort in the animation and the gameplay shows. However, I agree the instructions were scarce; if I didn't know the trick for thunderbird, for example, or how to beat wart (the throwing range is way too short, by the way), I'd have been stuck.

A very good game that's JUST shy of great. Excellent effort, this is still one of my favorite games now.

Score: 8

"Pretty Good"

submission: Anti-Pacman

date: August 21, 2007

Would be a perfect if the AI didn't hinder you rather than help you; sure, makes it easier, but you still need to be able to tell an AI ghost not to run right into Pacman.

Score: 5

"Not sure how I feel about this"

submission: :: Hot Enough For Ya? ::

date: August 10, 2007

It's a solid Foomy rant for once, but do you need the constant arbitrary boobie shots? It is getting OLD, fast.

I used to love IWP; now it's just weak and jeuvenille. Please, get back to the basics, before you lose all your viewers over 12 years old who can't manage to find porn somewhere ELSE on the internet.