Flawless work, gripping story, wonderfully put together. I'm not ashamed to say I teared up.
Anxiously awaiting "step 5" !
Good, but not as I expected
I liked it, though I knew I would going in.
That said, your style has changed in some ways. There was a lot of creepiness potential with Render being controlled, and it felt very 'up front'... I can't put my finger on any one thing, perhaps him talking too much made his new condition too 'comprehendable' to the viewers, I don't know. You redeemed it a lot with the 'my pleasure' line, however.
One of the things that felt eerily similar up until now was the relationship between Render and Smite; since you were abstract on the timeline, I debated if you were in fact turning one into the other, and that Smite's rampage was actually Render's future. While that could still be possible, I think the arrival of his sister and (possibly temporary) freedom from the bug makes that less likely. Like the physical arrival last episode, you've brought Render out of the clouds and down to Earth for the viewer.
All in all, you've cleared up the status quo a lot, and that mystery was part of the charm of the series. Still very much looking forward to where it's going, but if I had to site anything as a negative it would be that.
Good work, keep it up!
You've come a long way with this; I really didn't care for the haphazardness of the first few episodes, but the artsy feel of the entire series has really started to shine through as opposed to stubling over itself and muddling the storyline. I find myself running the gamit of emotions; you capture this tense creepiness and squeeze every last drop out of it, and your pacing is much more spot-on than it has been in the past. Excellent job with this piece, and I can't wait to see where you take it from here. Bravo!!!
Funny, but too long
Clever, but you could stand to shorten / cut the repetitve parts a little bit.
Other than that, I like.
Not sure how I feel about this
It's a solid Foomy rant for once, but do you need the constant arbitrary boobie shots? It is getting OLD, fast.
I used to love IWP; now it's just weak and jeuvenille. Please, get back to the basics, before you lose all your viewers over 12 years old who can't manage to find porn somewhere ELSE on the internet.
Impressive, smooth animation, consice and strong plotline. I'm definitely hoping you make more like this.
Great commentary on Capcom, just the right length and pacing, and hilarious joke at the end. Very solid Flash movie!
I saw this, so I sat down and watched the whole thing. It started wierd, and it gets really artsy at points, but this is really coming together into something really amazing. I love the combination of errors in the system and errors in blue's own head.
...and I haven't trusted pink since she died. Something ain't right.
Excellent fight scene with the skeletons, there was hardly any skewing to the images and you maintained a 3D environment very well. Nice use of Warhammer 40K music, too; I haven't heard that in years.
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